Neophyte

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    Neophyte
    Such a long grueling,
    continual set of seconds
    on Saturday..

    Fragile, eggshell
    silence...

    two strangers,
    stuck
    inside
    no structure...

    will there
    ever be solace
    of similarity?
    I am not
    so sanguine..

    no longer
    chameleonic...
    I shall remain
    as I am,
    with great aplomb..

    The Neophyte of Enlightenment!

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    wheelsal commented on Neophyte

    07-20-2009

    You have a great love of words and this shows in you tight poetry. Sally
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    ELRey commented on Neophyte

    07-09-2009

    I enjoy you brand of enlightenment. It carries your soul Your journey begins
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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