Dark Fight

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  • Sadness

    Dark Fight

    Your black dead eyes
    your cold beatless heart
    seem to hypnotize
    while your words rip me apart.

    And you break down
    im sorry but i got to run
    im afraid now
    but i cant put down the gun

    its killing me
    the way you scream
    what you dont see
    its not a dream





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    purdylox commented on Dark Fight

    05-10-2010

    I agree with 1990 wow I really enjoyed the flow alot
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    1990lh commented on Dark Fight

    05-10-2010

    Wow this was pretty awesome loved the read. short and straight to the point, i cant say much but wow this was rally great im going to give u a 10
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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