Dark Fight

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Dark Fight

Your black dead eyes
your cold beatless heart
seem to hypnotize
while your words rip me apart.

And you break down
im sorry but i got to run
im afraid now
but i cant put down the gun

its killing me
the way you scream
what you dont see
its not a dream





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purdylox commented on Dark Fight

05-10-2010

I agree with 1990 wow I really enjoyed the flow alot

1990lh commented on Dark Fight

05-10-2010

Wow this was pretty awesome loved the read. short and straight to the point, i cant say much but wow this was rally great im going to give u a 10

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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