Lack Of Life

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    Lack Of Life

     My friends are but digital reminders of the past
    my life is non-existent
    and I keep slipping fast
    and my bad luck seems to be persistent

    as I sit here all alone
    while everyone has a life to live
    I feel as if I'm a clone
    as I don't have any of my own feelings to give

    I cant tell if the days are going fast or slow
    I cant seem to think straight
    and my mood is lower than low
    perhaps its fate

    but it burns in my heart like a knife
    that while I remain in this world
    I seem to have a lack of life





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    Lunabella commented on Lack Of Life

    01-27-2011

    Ty for sharing this with me, its a small peak into your soul. I love the poem sweetheart. -Luna
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    Rhymer commented on Lack Of Life

    01-26-2011

    Dark poetry is a favorite of mine, this seems to me a person has slipped into depression and reflecting their feelings. 10
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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