nothingness

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nothingness

if anyone asks where i've gone
tell them i've died
if anyone asks when i am coming back
tell them when life is less cruel
no one knows the pain i've gone through
and the pain i am going through
yes each problem is terrible in it's own way
but the worst problem is nothingness
when you feel nothing
when you are dead inside
with that nothingness
you smile but don't feel happiness
you cry but don't feel sorrow
i felt the nothingness coming
and i was so scared
i needed someone
but no one was there for me
i have been through this once
and i really didn't want to go through it again
but it just happened so fast
and i wonder who will bring me back to life this time

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BreeLove commented on nothingness

02-27-2012

mami, i read a couple of ur other poems, and one of them referenced a Richard, i can only assume he is no longer a part of your life. all i can say is , stop putting ur trust in man and keep focused on God. For Men and People in general it is in our nature to let down and dissapoint the ones we love , sometimes unintentionally, but you have to learn to love urself, and be happy with who u r, u shouldnt need someone else to validate you or make u feel whole! love starts at home inside u, and its ok to luv others , just dont give so much so fast, and go in with no expectations and then u wont be disappointed.

darkangel16

02/28/2012

yes you are correct Richard is no longer a part of my life

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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darkangel16’s Poems (18)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Pain 2
ALONE 1
nothingness 1
What's Wrong? 0
leading on 0
Angel from Heaven 1
deliverer of death 2
let them go 1
Fire 2
Beauty 1
Busy Critters 0
Soul Mate 0
About Me 1
your the heartless one 3
may not love me later 6
how it is 1
give up 5
died again 2