Now & Then

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  • Devotion

    Now & Then

    05/08/07

    I still think of you now and then
    and I sit and wonder what could've been.
    You were so into me not so long ago, as I was with you.
    Could you still feel the same?
    'Cause I know you've been thinking of me too.
    Nothing has really changed between you and me, but do you ever wonder if we could've been meant to be?
    You still mean the world to me, even though I felt so much hate the day you broke my heart.
    My heart has forgiven you, and I don't feel as empty as I used to.
    As I sit and wonder what could've been, do you ever wonder the same?
    If we will never be again, we'll always have memories.
    But I'll always wonder what could've been, and think of you now and then.

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    gothicsueaside commented on Now & Then

    02-14-2009

    very good

    mmichelle97219 commented on Now & Then

    02-14-2009

    You start with a terrific meter and then just kind of lose it. The lines are a little long, and i would reconsider some of the line breaks. It is okay, but could be outstanding. Michelle

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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