Tragically Incomplete

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    Tragically Incomplete
    10/20/08
    I’m tragically incomplete.
    I can’t take this anymore.
    This heart of mine can’t keep falling apart
    ‘cause its happened too many times before.
    I’ve fallen into a void of loneliness
    This pain of being alone is unreal, with so much emptiness.
    I feel like I’ll never escape from this living nightmare.
    This is too much to bare.
    I’m tragically incomplete.
    Someone help me find the missing pieces and make this into a happy ending.

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    Rainz commented on Tragically Incomplete

    02-21-2009

    The pain in these words is palpable. We've all been there hun... It hurts the same every time, and eventually fades. Excellent work!
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