Walk Away

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    Walk Away
    03/06/07

    Give me a reason why I shouldn’t walk away
    With my head full of thoughts and words I probably won’t be able to say.
    Give me a reason why I should hold on.
    You say you care about me but why can’t you see how much you mean to me?
    Give me a reason why I should keep feeling this way.
    Right now I feel like I should give up and move on but my heart is saying different. Do you want to watch me walk away?
    Give me a reason why I should stay.

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    cloud8 commented on Walk Away

    10-30-2009

    Very touching and meaningful written! I really like it.
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    dogg144 commented on Walk Away

    02-25-2009

    your poem is full of depth and feeling...i like it very much
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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