On the Beach
You look out to the ocean.You see only blue.
At your feet a wave kisses.
The sun burns bright.
The wind blows cool.
You hear a gull.
You smell the sea breeze.
You are on the beach.
On the Beach
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Tags: Philosophy
You see only blue.
At your feet a wave kisses.
The sun burns bright.
The wind blows cool.
You hear a gull.
You smell the sea breeze.
You are on the beach.
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SpiritSong commented on On the Beach
07-28-2009
- I absolutely love this poem Patt...So rich is the images, sounds, smells, and the feeling of the cool wind upon my face. But my fav line is...At your feet a wave of kisses...brilliant! Well this one I have made a fav...I Love it, Thank you for sharing your gift with us all..have a beautiful day.."SpiritSong"
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07/31/2009
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