What Else Can You Ask For?

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    What Else Can You Ask For?

    The wind blows as a breeze.
    The rain gentling falls.
    The dog whimpers.
    The cat softly meows.
    The birds sing a song.
    What else can you ask for?

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    SmileBeautiful commented on What Else Can You Ask For?

    06-03-2009

    very beautiful i can picture it. The wind the rain the birds. sounds absoultly stunning its almost like i could paint it.. Great work its tiny but i love it:}

    patt13

    06/04/2009

    Thank-you

    patt13

    06/13/2009

    Thank-you! I'm so behind on my e-mails!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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