On Wings of Green

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    On Wings of Green

    On Wings of Green
    Phread, 2005

    So, the other evening,
    I was sitting in the dusk
    just thinking about you and me
    and where life has taken us…
    when a bright green bug
    lit on the back of my hand.

    This beautiful bug
    so fascinated me
    that I let it stay there
    and just beheld it…

    My thoughts went to you
    for no real reason, since
    what does a beautiful, unusual
    insect with green wings so much
    bigger than its slight body
    have to do with you?

    I watch it move now
    my eyes burn from trying
    to focus every ounce of me
    on my new, green, winged friend…
    My vision blurs a bit as I see its
    finely netted mirror-image wings
    and I place it gently on the table…

    He rests, reminding me
    it is almost time to go to sleep.
    And my thoughts go back to you,
    So I reach my hand out to stroke your face
    I whisper my voice into your dreams
    and salty tears merge into salty waves
    waves I hope you will soon crest…

    I turn the lamp light off
    and realize I may never see my
    insect friend again …

    So, I finally understand
    what the oddly beautiful insect
    has to do with you,
    my love...
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    mlptaylor commented on On Wings of Green

    10-07-2009

    I love the pain and pleasure of nostalgia. You have captured it here, beautifully.

    Phread

    10/07/2009

    Thanks for your kind words.

    jademelissa74 commented on On Wings of Green

    08-03-2009

    Wow! This piece is full of anguish. The reader is reeled in to a world beyond imagination. You have the gift of crafting unique pieces that hypnotize the readers. You do not cease to amaze me. Great job!

    Phread

    08/04/2009

    Thanks for your kind words, JM.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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