Once again...

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  • Lost Love

    Once again...


    Things that used to matter,
    will all be missed...
    holding up to empty promises,
    where love doesn't even exist...


    Sharing everything,
    and giving it all the best-
    the courage to visit unknown places,
    to find you're like the rest...

    All those promised dreams,
    filled with so much hopes,
    came crashing through me,
    with no remorse.

    Almost made it home
    while leaving was the thing to do-
    yet a chance was granted...
    getting back felt so right with you.


    Some says, fool will always be fool,
    not all are the same...
    what holds the real ending-
    Can someone please explain?

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    brayim commented on Once again...

    06-12-2009

    Subhania,i like this: "All those promised dreams, filled with so much hopes, came crashing through me, with no remorse"

    Subhania

    06/18/2009

    thank you so much, you seem to motivate me on this hard timing. I'll explain to u why I haven't had much time to log and and write lately. hopefully I'll come up with some new poems soon.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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