out of focuse

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    out of focuse

     up left down right
    i cant see straight any more

    whats wrong with me
    i dont know

    im confused
    once again

    sigh
    well what do i do

    i have to keep on going
    i must live
    i most conquer

    so im asking you this
    will you help me

    or do you care

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    Papa commented on out of focuse

    04-02-2010

    Like the song says"love the one you're with'".. From someone who's wore out a lot of shoes running around the block, it gets better.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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