Target

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Target





This pain is undeniable stabbing me like darts

I wonder why I'm the target of something so dark

this cloud is inevitable always weighing me down

the storm soaks me heart and yet i make no sound.

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Dano commented on Target

04-21-2010

alot of feelings in just a short amount of words... great expression... nicely written

trainpain

04/22/2010

thanks!

trainpain commented on Target

04-09-2010

thanks. :)

BringMeBullets commented on Target

04-09-2010

So powerful in such a short write. But I love it. I'll save this to my favorites. To be honest, I think this might be my favorite out of all your work. So far, anyway. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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