Past Moments of IF

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Past Moments of IF

How different life would have been
If the sun had shone that day.
Where would this soul have sailed?
What words would it have to say?

What dreams would have been fulfilled?
What futures changed to gold ?
Had that single voice been heard,
And thoughts had room to unfold.

Where in the expanse of time
Will that moment return again?
Will thoughts explode in triumph
And pour from the soul like rain?

Will there be an ear to listen,
A heart to comprehend?
Will the moment pass in memory
Where all knowledge has to end?

And time becomes the tomb
for thoughts that waited to flow.
And the words that never flourished
From the soul that refused to grow

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Dedicated to those souls that let
another's dream, become more
important than theirs.
JL   2009

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Charlie23 commented on Past Moments of IF

10-27-2009

I find you offer a lot of wisdom in your writing! I enjoy your style!

Photojan12

10/28/2009

Thank you Charlie. Life is a dream that needs to be realizied.

wolfnomad commented on Past Moments of IF

09-22-2009

I found this poem to be truly inspirational thank you for writing it

Photojan12

09/27/2009

Thank you so much for your comments. It's great when we can encourage each other.

Vonn commented on Past Moments of IF

09-14-2009

its alwaya good to want wats best for others but u still have to think about yourself. no matter how selfless people claim to be they think bout themselves as well...eventually. but i hope u got back to ur dreams

Photojan12

09/14/2009

Thank you for your comment. Iam a caretaker as are many others and we always put others ahead of our needs. I am somewhat on track now. I have 4 children's books published and am working on my 5th about Puffins. It took a long time to get here.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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