PLEASE

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    PLEASE
    How many times do I have to say Please?

    Please move so I can get by.

    Please release my heart so I can live and love again.

    Please let mee take a breath so I can be free.

    Please stay out of my mind so I can think on my own.

    I have said it so many times that it no-longer means anything.

    It is just another word, that is just hollow.

    You have taken so much from me, now is the time for me to take back
    my dreams, hopes, and desires.

    This is the last time for you to hear Please from Me.

    Please take care for now I am free of You.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on PLEASE

    10-12-2010

    I can so relate to this poem..........please stay out of my mind so I can think on my own........................fantastic line is an even better poem
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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