poem 39

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    poem 39
    behind those high walls
    insects play hide and seek
    beneath the waterfalls
    water runs so weak
    within the grass crawls
    small creatures so meek.
    are these what it takes
    to make two hearts meet?

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    Artie commented on poem 39

    10-18-2009

    If you're trying to meet someone on a poetry website, yes. lol - you have a very unique style.
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    camins4955

    10/26/2009

    Hi

    truckingd commented on poem 39

    10-04-2009

    enjoyed reading this poem , it is short but much meaning , liked very much and have a good day
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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