Poem 16

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  • Emotional

    Poem 16
    thy love thee hath see
    flowing slowly cuddling me
    in this shanty by the sea
    the wind came out chilling me!

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    Rotanman commented on Poem 16

    02-09-2009

    I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT IS SHORT AND HAS A LOT OF POWER AND EMOTION! A 10 RATING!
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    camins4955

    06/22/2009

    Thanks. It was really meant to be that way!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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