Poem2

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    Poem2

    Dark and cold
    Used and sold
    A blistery scene
    You and me

    Quiet hours
    Pondered days
    light slowly turns to gray
    memories of you fade away

    No longer wanting to live this way
    My lip quivers
    My soul shivers
    love dies
    My spirits high
    No longer do I sigh

    And wish you would arrive

    I got carried away
    Day light comes
    The sun looks like fun
    So, now I'm done

     

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    Panaramicpoet commented on Poem2

    05-22-2009

    I love your flow. Its like a sprint on poetry. it reads really fast . . .LOL . .and "so now im done" . . .GREAT!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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