Promise to Stone

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    • Desmotti
    • The wraith is but sadness in mortal form. It haunts to hunt, and hunts to feed. It cannot feed on any emotion. This is its pain. for emotion is not segregated it is fealt, and to feel is warmth.

    Promise to Stone

     Little one with eyes so bright...
    I'll stay up with you in the night...
    to hug and hold you when the fire...
    makes you sad...and keeps you tired...

    Little one my rock my child...
    my little me...who runs so wild...
    I love your passion and happy hopes...
    your laugh and fun words help me cope....

    Little one my crown of jewels...
    I'll fight the monsters in your room...
    I'll slay the dragons...slice em down...
    and warn the rest my voice full boom...

    Little one I am your father...
    I'll lift you when your legs they fail
    to give you water...a gift of life...
    I'll dig a thousand mile deep well...

    To make sure that your bellies full...
    to make sure that you've toys for laughter...
    to make sure that you know your loved...
    to have the good...for you I'll capture.

    Little one I'll fail you not...
    I cannot fail my little rock...
    through storm and nightmare...
    we'll face together
    Count on me son...I am your father.

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    Maat commented on Promise to Stone

    07-13-2010

    a father 'affections most nobly portrayed... loved it
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Promise to Stone

    03-11-2010

    My feelings to my kids as well Des... and even now still when their off to college
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    earthly commented on Promise to Stone

    02-04-2010

    so comforting-Our Father provides such hope if we look to him...Earthly
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    DeepEclipse commented on Promise to Stone

    01-12-2010

    You are a good shelter, keeping one from being left out to burn in the sun. Surely he will treasure you more for it. A father's love for his son is irreplaceable. It will make him a stronger man for it. Good expression of sincere emotion.
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    CailOfTarnak commented on Promise to Stone

    01-08-2010

    Uncle nice poem you have put a lot of emotion into it I hope Stone is doing better
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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