"The Abyss"

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"The Abyss"

Why have I fallen into an abyss?
Is it the way he looks at me that makes me go deeper?
He sees to me like a gardner sees to his flowers...
He loves me like no other...
The heat from his touch causes me to shiver...
The tingling sensation that I feel arouses me...
Just from the shadow of his hand when he touches me
Makes me want him to hold me so tightly in his arms...
When I am in his abyss...
He climbs my mountains...
He explores my valleys...
He causes my oceans to overflow...
He sucks out of me every breath I have
And makes it his own...
Then he loves me with my own breath
After he has nurtured it and refined it...
As he blows it back into my spirit,
I feel so connected with him...
We are one...
It's because of his love
I have fallen so deep into this abyss...
Will i ever come out of his abyss?
Do I really want to?

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Qualin commented on "The Abyss"

12-01-2009

A treasure some find and some still look for greener pastures...You know when it's right ..your heart tells you keep it there with all your might....be not afraid to share it with the one you know is right...a mistake I have lived through, the one who suffered was me..so always tell that special one of your heart felt feelings, time slips away...and then............ a very good write thanks Qualin

TheInspiration

02/02/2010

thank u again Qualin...

gogant commented on "The Abyss"

09-26-2009

Do you realize dear, this one line says so much...he would be enraptured hearing it from your unspoken eyes...

TheInspiration

10/01/2009

wow... thanks gogant.... glad u c that....

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

TheInspiration’s Poems (7)

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"The Abyss" 2
"Him" 6
"If I Could" 3
"Speak 2 Me" 3
"Touch Me" 6
"Prayer" 2
"Patience" 3