"THE ESSENCE OF DAWN"

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  • jimsdaone
  • is Trying to recover from a major loss in my life

"THE ESSENCE OF DAWN"



The essence of Dawn,
lingers throughout my veins.
After so much heart ache,
the feelings still remain.

What can i do,
to lose these feelings.
I do not want them any more,
the pain, so damn revealing.

Anger and sadness,
and heart ache so true.
How do i rid myself,
of these feelings for you.

I tried the hate thing,
which didn't work so well.
I just kept wishing,
the Lord would banish you to hell.

I know those thoughts were wrong,
I am sorry my Lord.
We are all your children,
please forgive me my Lord.

For me to pass judgement,
is so very wrong.
I have no right,
but i've been hurting for too long.

I must let go,
the pain has gone on too long.
Let go of these feelings,
which are "The Essence of Dawn".

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quickwrite commented on "THE ESSENCE OF DAWN"

10-20-2009

A very good write, I too wrote a poem about dawn, but we both took different paths. You choose to describe emotions of the when, and I choose to view it as an event. I think your point comes across stronger but if you want to compare check out, Pristine Dawn.

jimsdaone

07/23/2010

Thank you, I appreciate the comment, I will check out your write,....thanks again.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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