Rain

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I wrote this one when i was really depressed in 9th grade.It's alright.

Rain

The rain is pouring down on me
True lies and sorrow are all I see
I'd hate to think we are through at this point but we are
Make way for hell it's coming fast, no one said lif would be a blast
It's full of murder, lies and deceit
There is no one to run to, no place to hide. If you were smart you'd see it too.
The end of the world is coming soon.
Don't think it's insane, it's how things are. Make way for evil nothing is purely good by far. Which brings us to hate. You're not born to hate, just to love. But it seems to be the opposite.
The grass looks greener from the other side but when we get there it's all the same.
The old feelings cower in the past.
The new feelings embrace the present and look forward to the future. Feelings of love and hate and murder and courage.
None of them truely reached but hate.
You never hear on the news about two people falling in love with each other. All you hear is one person murdering the other because they hated them. If you have feelings of hate, replace them with love. Find someone who will love you. Don't let the world end before you decide to. Do it now. Don't let feelings of anger eat at you because you can't find someone. Once you find that perfect someone, your world of love will never end.

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FrootLoops16 commented on Rain

03-16-2011

god this is so true.....it makes me kinda think, ya know? makes me wonder how much better life would be if people took a minute to stop & think about what they're all doing....

xXxNoNormalxXx commented on Rain

04-14-2010

this has a great message(: if only people would listen..

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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