Return love to me

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    One of my most popular poems.

    Return love to me
    Dark imprints of my sadness
    shadowy flecks across my heart
    once filled with happiness
    until you broke it apart

    Once overflowing with love,
    misery now fills my cup
    a mixture of pain and tears
    I need love to fill it up.

    I can see our bedroom silhouettes
    soft prints where you used to lay
    you nestled against my breast
    as we whispered the night away.

    Missing you is hurting me
    And breaking my heart in two
    You took away my fantasy
    Now bring back all I gave to you.

    Bring it back, give it back to me
    Embrace me with in your arms again
    All I want is what you took from me
    Your tender love, minus the pain.

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    gogant commented on Return love to me

    01-13-2011

    The deeper the love...the deeper the pain when it goes........This is simply beautiful in the way you imprison those who read this....into a dark abyss..............................................................gogant
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Return love to me

    01-13-2011

    Beautiful expression of love lost. Your wording is eloquent. Great write. I wish you well in your healing process..............E
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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