Love training

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    Love training

    Sensuality 
         
    abounds within
          
      at the first whisper

    of your sensouos voice

       your lips do control me
      
      in this  lesson of passion
       
      I am your eager pupil
      in training for love

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Love training

    01-07-2011

    Now Topaz this could be a song, it has a beat, like the part in training for love can be the repeating lyric, I like it. It sounds like it could be a hit:)
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    Topaz2011’s Poems (20)

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    Soul Embraced 1 02/26/2011
    Tender mercy 2 01/31/2011
    Sweet romantic trappings 1 01/31/2011
    Legend of the enchanted river 2 01/15/2011
    Perfect little pieces 1 01/14/2011
    Return love to me 3 01/13/2011
    Damaged 1 01/13/2011
    Memory Streams 1 01/13/2011
    Crimson stains 1 01/13/2011
    A rose will have to do 1 01/13/2011
    Embrace the night 2 01/07/2011
    Love training 1 01/07/2011
    Memory cascade 1 01/04/2011
    I must except this 2 01/04/2011
    The mystery I miss 1 01/04/2011
    Love's joy 1 01/03/2011
    Dream SeaQuence 1 01/03/2011
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