Revelation

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    Revelation

     as i undress
    myself before you
    piece
    by piece one article
    of clothing
    at
    a time
    i watch

    your face your
    body the way
    your eyes
    grow wide
    and round
    as if in
    surprise

    your hands clench
    up
    instinctively
    and you sharply
    inhale deep
    and deeply

    it hits me
    that maybe
    you didnt
    after all
    expect me
    to be
    a woman.

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    JJMann commented on Revelation

    02-01-2010

    Um - not surprise, love - it's a matter of delight: pure delight!
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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