Sadness

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    this poem is something i had to get out....girl freind being unreasonable lol

    Sadness

    Like a black plague it kills me slowly
    All i ever want is a loving family
    The love i wish to have in my heart
    The Respect i wish to have in my mind
    My fear is has right to be hear
    For i feel nothing
    Not the warmth of the love in my soul
    Not the softness of compassion on my skin
    Despair feels my every pore, Oh how i wish to end this pain
    In the dark i sit with my shadow as my only freind
    I pray to my god for a blessing but doubt enters and i feel as though im sinking
    I imagine myself falling into the water disappearing from the world eternal
    Oh please, Oh please will no woman give me sanctuary....

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    Rhymer commented on Sadness

    07-05-2010

    Excellent write, man was meant to find that special someone. Without them we feel lost as your poem reflects. Nice write.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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