I see

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    I see
    I see her in the darkness
    I see her in the light
    I see her in my dreams
    I see her in the clouds
    I see are children
    I see us
    I see her, hair as dark as midnight, Skin as beautiful as carmel
    I see a smile beautiful enough to make my heart skip a beat
    I see my soul mate
    I see my wife
    I see my peace of mind
    I see my goddess

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    Artie commented on I see

    04-30-2010

    I like the general feeling of this piece. You use your words well - 10 from me
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    kinghur

    04/30/2010

    thanx man it helps put out more work with positive comments

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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