Lost and Found Devotion

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    Lost and Found Devotion

    I feel my emotion like a quickening heart beat. My tears fall like leaves from a tree. My soul breaks like cracks in a mountain. My reality shakes like a mightz earthquake. My life is without equal yet incomplete. I possess money that could block out the sun. But my happiness is still gone without reason but my angel descended from giant rose. Her hands healed my world and kept me a drift i thank the lord that god made you

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    Artie commented on Lost and Found Devotion

    04-30-2010

    This is a very powerful piece. The strength of your feelings is well illustrated here. I like the line - "My soul breaks like cracks in a mountain" - 10 from me

    kinghur

    04/30/2010

    yea...i had inspiration from my girl lol she deserves all the thanx here

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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