Save me

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    • spazrocks420
    • needs to write a paper for class and has no idea where to start

    Save me

    When you told me,

    You didn’t care,

    I shed my tears,

    I sat and stared,

    I gave you my love,

    You brought me pain,

    I wanted you,

    To play this game.

     

    I wanted love,

    You broke my heart,

    I stole your fear,

    It fell apart,

    This never worked,

    When will this end,

    Will you save me?

    My heart will bend.

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Save me

    10-04-2010

    I think it is very valid point to the pain of heartbreak, and well written in the otne you felt.
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    redbloodink commented on Save me

    06-11-2010

    We all get hurt at times in our lives .... it's to help us grow..... with a deeper love and a pruer love you will find a prue love for you back..... live and write on..... red
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    Blueroad commented on Save me

    04-16-2010

    Really beautiful! I enjoyed reading it a lot. I hope you leave behind this stage of your life, and meet a new sun.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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