shapes

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    shapes

    shapes, i see them all the time,
    fat, slim, ground and green, blue and black
    waving their magic wands slowly
    against a cloud of phantom passersby

    shapes, i see them all the time
    hunger beaten, swinging and flexing from morning
    huriedly like a wounded serpent,shrinking
    towards a cloudy night

    shapes, their voices are little sounds
    springing from wet and dry trees and little forest huts
    where birds and men have lived  to tell their tale
    and them trees, clouds, and seas, wave as we come and go

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    photochick commented on shapes

    09-02-2009

    very well written you give off great imagery and paint a grand picture keep up the great work

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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