Whispers from Within

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    i wrote Whispers from Within when i discovered a gap was creating betwwen me and elsie, i was poor, i couldnt get to marry her because her family will not accept me. so i wrote her poems hoping she will wait for me.  hoping i will return before May was out

    Whispers from Within

     Early like the unfailing Sun
    Comes to visit at dawn
    I'll like to be a faithful friend
    As much as I can be

    Each time and when you think of me
    There love I think will be
    I'll always be a part of you
    When death do come my way.

    So wait till the long end of may
    You'll have my love please pray
    For we are like the cool sea breeze
    That freshens the sea shore.

    Though the lone way be still as hard
    With life that treats me bad
    I'll grieve and rend, bark and shed tears
    As yet and break my fears.

    Not long from now I'll make my dreams
    And come to you with joy
    So wait for till the long end of may
    You'll have my love please pray.     Ndzedzeni Etienne Fondzefe

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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