So Deeply In Love

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    So Deeply In Love


    I want to be so deeply in love with you
    That even when I’m not around you
    I can feel every breath you make
    So deeply in love with you that,
    You can hear every beat of my heart!

    I want to be so deeply in love with you that
    You can read my mind and finish my sentences
    That I could whisper to your heart and you’ll hear me calling
    That I could speak too you without saying a word!

    I want to be so deeply in love with you
    When it’s cold outside you could still feel the warmth of my love
    And when it’s foggy outside
    I can still see you through the mist!

    So deeply in love with you
    That my eyes glisten brighter then diamonds
    Every time you walked into the room
    I want to be so deeply in love with you
    That when you brush against me,
    Every hair on my skin stands up!

    I want to be so deeply in love with you
    That if one of us every went missing
    Our love would be so strong and prevailing
    Like twins separated from birth,
    We would find our way back into each other’s arms!

    I want to be so deeply in love with you
    That when you look into my eyes
    You can see way down in the depth of my soul
    Because I am truly and
    So deeply in love with you!

    Copyright © 2008
    Aka Paradice







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    Sx9 commented on So Deeply In Love

    07-21-2011

    be careful what you wish for,this king of deeply can turn to madness if i change my mind and run from the attention and hard work,yes we strive for the deeply and even wish for,,but in life we needourselves to be sane and dry,,good penship,..

    1990lh commented on So Deeply In Love

    06-14-2010

    beautiful poem you dont really see that kind of love anymore, great write

    Smileey11 commented on So Deeply In Love

    12-10-2009

    So much feeling. I honestly don't know if I would want something like that though. It sounds a little terrifying to love that deeply.

    OddOneOut commented on So Deeply In Love

    12-07-2009

    Very deep and inspiring. Inspiring me to go find a love so strong. My favorite line is "Our love would be so strong and prevailing Like twins separated from birth, We would find our way back into each other’s arms!" Loved it!!!

    Paradice21

    12/07/2009

    Thanks for the Love When I reread it st times I realized that, that is one of My Favorite lines to!

    inkmaster commented on So Deeply In Love

    11-30-2009

    Very deep, a nice write, and read.....................................inkmaster

    Paradice21

    12/03/2009

    Thanks for the comment Mr Inkmaster I love that Name and May just have to write a Poem about it!!

    Paradice21

    12/03/2009

    Thanks for the comment Mr Inkmaster I love that Name and May just have to write a Poem about it!!

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