something's wrong

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  • Loss

    something's wrong
    I feel empty inside
    With no one to hold
    No one to call my own
    My heart hurts so badly
    because of all the fire it has gone through
    I tried to cover it up and pretend
    but it's eating me, slowly inside
    Too many times
    I've been hurt
    Too many times
    I've been rejected
    Is there something wrong with me?
    I looked in the mirror and what did I see
    a stranger staring back at me
    Is that me?
    Am I not pretty?
    Is the color of my skin a problem,
    the reason for my lonliness?
    Is the problem just me?
    Is the problem them?
    why can't they see the beauty within
    I feel empty inside
    I feel drained
    With no one to hold
    No one to call my own
    It hurts so much
    like a black hole
    I am a hole of nothing

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    Insideme commented on something's wrong

    02-18-2011

    The truly beautiful people are often looked over in life, I can relate to what youre saying here, Ive written a few along the same lines myself. Good Poem and great expression of the Inside.
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    Rhymer commented on something's wrong

    09-03-2010

    Such a vivid write, the readers feel your pain, loneliness, and depression from start to finish. To answer your question, no there is nothing wrong with you. A lot of people have been where you speak. All you have to do is read some of my poetry to know I understand your feelings. For everyone there is someone, the hard part is findding them. Peace and healing.
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    christliked commented on something's wrong

    09-03-2010

    I have some advise for you cause I too feel pain and at my age 50 I wish that I was not so passionate about the people who rejected and diappointed me they controlled my life by pressing me to submitt to there fears ans suffering please dont spend another day allowing them to win forgive and forget and go on with your life
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    lonewolf commented on something's wrong

    04-29-2009

    wow! i feel your pain. theres nothing wrong with you. youre a beautiful humanbeing
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    EbonyQueen48 commented on something's wrong

    03-30-2009

    I can relate to this poem because I too ask these same questions, I feel sad alot and I wish people could understand my pain, so I write and write, I appreciate you sharing this poem, great poem, keep your head up!!
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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