Trying to Hold on

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    Trying to Hold on
    My faith has been crushed repeatedly
    The light at the end of the tunnel seems to be vanishing by the minute
    My thoughts are not my own
    I have become a prisoner in my own body
    the hurt, the shame, the disgrace
    the scars they leave
    Emotionally, Physically, Spiritually and Psychological
    I want to give up
    But in the midst of it all my troubles
    I can hear a voice saying:
    Hold on

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    Insideme commented on Trying to Hold on

    02-18-2011

    I've made myself a prisoner so many times , dont feel alone. I think this is a good poem and more importantly I think it did you good to write it!
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    Phoenix9 commented on Trying to Hold on

    05-03-2009

    Great flow and message here, well done
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    Sopradiction commented on Trying to Hold on

    04-22-2009

    Tangible pain-- promising ending- very good flow-hold on... to it--
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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