Standing Alone part 2

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    Standing Alone part 2

    Standing alone again on a rockcliff view, needing to speak where are you? Needing you to listen where was your call ? Maybe it is that you don't care at all ! Maybe it is meant for me to take this fall, because you never cared at all. Devils advocate may have been there to confide, but in the lingering took my pride. I sat aside the lonliness and pain of standing alone on a rockcliff view. But you never came what the hell was wronge with you? One of these days you will be on that rock cliff view too! And understand why I asked " where were you?"

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    Beetle726 commented on Standing Alone part 2

    11-23-2009

    WOW! What magnifisent touch with not only your emotions, but reality. Not only do you see and dream a vision, you feel. Great work, keep it up.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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