Taken away

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    Taken away
    You may have taken my kids from me, but my heart you did not for I have found that it is mine and yours it is not. You stole my pride,self worth and soul for years and now im free and shed no tears. You fooled yourself into thinking that you could control me for life and now you know that will never happen as I am someone elses wife. You may have my kids which are a part of me but never will you have the chance to ever control me. For I am free.....

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    origionalmerlin commented on Taken away

    04-06-2009

    a good rant your feelings come through your words write more...Poet
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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