Why me

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    Why me

    Sometimes I wonder why me?
    My friends have left and gone away.
    My boyfriend hasleft and gone to war to serve his country for the pour. And still I wonder why me?
    I sit in a four cornered room in the house and wonder why my life has left me. I am but a shadow on the wall no where to run no where to crawl. My life seems unfair, crooked and mean, Or am I just thinking of something thoughtless and unseen? The world is trashed from hatered and pollution and still no one cares about the revolution. And still I wonder why me? The war is over and the battle too and still no word. So here I sit in a shadow of a four cornered box without no friends, love or feelings. Still I wonder why me?

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    TamiG76 commented on Why me

    05-21-2009

    OUCH!!!!!! This one hurts on so many levels!!!!! Okay, you did a wonderful job writing this. The picture is painted clearly for all who read it. The imagery and inflection are also good. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

    heartoftears

    05/28/2009

    Thamk you so very much I will be putting more up soon

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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