stupid teenage "love" crushes

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    stupid teenage "love" crushes

    I know were not dating
    but my love for you is
    not fating, you promised
    we'd still be friends, but
    I don't think I can keep
    that promise to the end

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    Alexgrey commented on stupid teenage "love" crushes

    03-23-2009

    bforibus is dead-on with that comment. Try to expand your vernacular, and maybe write from perspective rather than the words your fingers auto-type. Get me? I'm looking forward to seeing the ways your works shine.

    bforibus commented on stupid teenage "love" crushes

    03-23-2009

    this incomplete thought is a good start but travel further with the thought. explore the ugly colors along with the beautiful ones

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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