What did I do?

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    What did I do?
    What did I do to deserve you? you built me, then knocked me down, until my heart bled all over the ground. I never knew what you were capable of, i guess i was wrong about you, you tore me down to the point were i had no self worth, what kind of mother treats her child the way you did? being hit and cursed at is not spending quality time. I think I'm just about done being pushed around by you, I need to get out, I need to escape, I need to cover up the bruises, that you have made and escape your clutches for myself before its to late. you put that guilt upon me, and it should not be that way.. who knew that, that face could be the face of a mother, no one! cause your not a mother, your not even a friend to others, you put guilt upon every ones shoulders, when it should be put upon yours. you take advantage, hurt the Innocent, and make my life life a living hell, I can't take this anymore, its time to spread my wings and fly, even though my wings are clipped i can run, so I'll run, run so far away to escape your insanity! good bye..

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    cliftondurant commented on What did I do?

    04-20-2009

    In time of trouble run away to jesus and in his arm rest you will fine peace heart felt
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    lovinsmind commented on What did I do?

    04-14-2009

    i agree with rosejane you have the beginings of a great poem just break it down like she said. im sorry life has given you this hardship i understand and can relate fully. ive read some of your other stuff and think your writing will be spectacular once you learn a style. hang in there youd be amazed what the world has to offer you keep your chin up and keep up the work. take care!
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    rosejane commented on What did I do?

    04-14-2009

    I am moved by your heart breaking experience with your mom. The sentiment is interesting and can make a really great poem. Just a little segregation on the lines to make a stanza to create a real poetic rhythm... Take care! Jesus Cares and can mend a broken spirit!!!
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    darklancer19 commented on What did I do?

    04-14-2009

    very good and se very deep the emotion that is shown in the hole thing
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    thenomad commented on What did I do?

    04-14-2009

    hauntingly deep, this one i couldn't read twice, too painful.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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