Your not listening!!!

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Your not listening!!!

Every time that I try to help
it seems, I only make things worse
every time I try to explain all
you do is complain...
I'm sick of all the lies, and the
drama that you bring
I mine as well shut up and be 
a mime for you because 
YOUR NOT LISTENING!!!! 

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Ninjaboy commented on Your not listening!!!

04-27-2011

this is good baby, who is it about? if its me, im sorry and shall try to listen better, i love you baby, i really do, and will do all i can to keep you happy, i do hope i didnt cause this though....

Musicmynded1 commented on Your not listening!!!

04-27-2011

So many songs set to this scenario, love how you just straight out say it.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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