Sunshine

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Sunshine is a new poem of mine. It was written while I was sitting with a poetry group I belong to. It started out as being about the feeling I get from a beautiful sunny day and how it affects my mood and lifts me up out of any bad mood, but as I was writing the poem it turned out to be about my husband. He gives me the same feeling as a beautiful sunny day would. I hope you enjoy it!

Sunshine

On a hot day it is orange

On a cold day barely there

On a hot day it will hurt your eyes

To look right into it

But close your eyes

And it lives inside of you

If you let it

When I'm with you

Sunshine is alive in me

I can feel it in my hair

On my skin

In my heart

It's like nothing else

The way it warms me

The way you do

When you hold me

In your arms

And keep me warm

Until the sun goes down

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Rygar commented on Sunshine

09-19-2009

awww, you are truly in love, i can tell because you express so beautifully.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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