Surrounded By Flowers

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    Surrounded By Flowers
    As the flowers wither
    Along the winds of lust
    Flowing like angels
    Brushing my raven wings
    I let my spirit revive
    And follow your heart
    Into your forbidden gardens
    And surrounded by flowers
    I found myself!

    Over delicate colorful petals
    In your vastness I lay to rest
    Burying our broken memories
    Thorns that make me bleed
    The bitterness of our past

    A new spring is here with you
    I inhale the multiple incenses
    Coming from your skin
    The nest that gives me glory
    And the will to live
    Open the windows
    The day is bright
    I eat the fruits of your fields
    Trough the never land of your hills.

    But there is a gate
    I’m scared to enter
    Deep in your eyes
    For in them dwells the torch
    The fire that I aim for
    With green background
    In your cosmos I navigate
    Take me to your nature
    To saw my seed
    In your forest I will live
    Surrounded by flowers…

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    stellar commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    09-24-2009

    wow...love the simile and metaphors...this poem is a very fine example of romanticism...others use it in a trite way...but here...behind this poem is a very powerful mind...oh...love the delicate description of sex...
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    cmlestrade commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    09-23-2009

    totaaly awesome poem or should I say prose. The similes and metaphors actually gave a lot of depth to this poem. The rhythm had a nice steady flow despite the torrent of emotions expressed. This was a joy to read.
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    frog commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-11-2009

    Creative and well written.
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    Madelynn commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-03-2009

    Such a paradise you have painted,with love and fear of love so well told!This was such a vivid dedication to the heart.-it read very well with a easy flow,imagery was captivating,the love story was timeless.This is a favorite!-great work!
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    nickyssecrets commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-03-2009

    I really enjoyed this. :) I like the undertones more than the plain word.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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