Surrounded By Flowers

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    Surrounded By Flowers

    As the flowers wither
    Along the winds of lust
    Flowing like angels
    Brushing my raven wings
    I let my spirit revive
    And follow your heart
    Into your forbidden gardens
    And surrounded by flowers
    I found myself!

    Over delicate colorful petals
    In your vastness I lay to rest
    Burying our broken memories
    Thorns that make me bleed
    The bitterness of our past

    A new spring is here with you
    I inhale the multiple incenses
    Coming from your skin
    The nest that gives me glory
    And the will to live
    Open the windows
    The day is bright
    I eat the fruits of your fields
    Trough the never land of your hills.

    But there is a gate
    I’m scared to enter
    Deep in your eyes
    For in them dwells the torch
    The fire that I aim for
    With green background
    In your cosmos I navigate
    Take me to your nature
    To saw my seed
    In your forest I will live
    Surrounded by flowers…

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    stellar commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    09-24-2009

    wow...love the simile and metaphors...this poem is a very fine example of romanticism...others use it in a trite way...but here...behind this poem is a very powerful mind...oh...love the delicate description of sex...

    cmlestrade commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    09-23-2009

    totaaly awesome poem or should I say prose. The similes and metaphors actually gave a lot of depth to this poem. The rhythm had a nice steady flow despite the torrent of emotions expressed. This was a joy to read.

    frog commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-11-2009

    Creative and well written.

    Madelynn commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-03-2009

    Such a paradise you have painted,with love and fear of love so well told!This was such a vivid dedication to the heart.-it read very well with a easy flow,imagery was captivating,the love story was timeless.This is a favorite!-great work!

    nickyssecrets commented on Surrounded By Flowers

    05-03-2009

    I really enjoyed this. :) I like the undertones more than the plain word.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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