AWAY

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    AWAY

    Our vacation has begun
    Look at the water breaks
    Islands among the ocean
    Tiny communities lost in the wild
    A soundtrack of B-sides and rarities
    Playing in this endless day
    In the highway to paradise

    Passing Santa Claus lane
    No a drop of snow insight
    The sun bright above us
    The North Pole can not be further away
    The big yellow house stands tall by the coast
    Sea life plays with joy in the far horizon

    The eagle sores the sky
    Ray of light blinding the surface
    Majestic ranges across the skyline
    Chiseling out the legend of the land
    Antelopes running wild through the plane
    Trees in a dramatically pose witness our trip
    Far away from the city
    Leaving our pain behind

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    cmlestrade commented on AWAY

    08-23-2009

    I just realized from reading this and your other poems what a great respect and love of the land you have. I don't think I realized how fully until tonight. This poem is a tribute to that love. Wonderful writing.

    Cinderella commented on AWAY

    03-05-2009

    I like this one a lot!

    mykhail commented on AWAY

    03-04-2009

    You have a way with words and description, like I said before, a true poet, your lines are short, to the point and full of breath!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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