The Battle Still Rages

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"The Battle Still Rages" presents an observation of the battle being fought to create a single world government to rule the world and invites consideration as to the divisive strategies used to justify the creation of this new world order,

The Battle Still Rages

Latest reports tell us what to fear

Women fear rape

Children fear men

Men fear each other

The world has gone to hell

Differences tear our world apart

But ask from where these messages really start

 

Media mouthpiece

Government voice

Race, religion, class and crime

Devices used to deride and divide

They don’t want us happy with what we’ve got

Because each promoted fear holds their new order up

We make them money and we keep them strong

With every niggah pushing lyric in our gangsta songs

 

Keeping up with the Jones’s spiritually wrong

What will it take to make your mind strong

Turn off the TV and open both eyes

Because seeing with one won’t help you get past the lies

Find joy in your heart and you can’t go wrong

Live life in faith and your joy will be long

Find things in common with your fellow man

Because only this will defeat THEM and their master plan

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alexander316 commented on The Battle Still Rages

03-22-2010

i love political poetry especially in the times we are in.....very provacative subject.why?because all around us people want to pretend these things just arent happening and they are. i too instruct martial arts and train people from my house in san diego,ca.I understand the warrior monk mentallity neccessary to develope us as whole beings and therefore even more so appreciate your position. namaste

WarriorMonk

03/22/2010

Thanks Alexander. What is your art? As you say, we are beings of mind and body. the mind often synonymous to the soul. Most train only one part of the "self" not realising how much more they are. Today we are living in difficult times and in my write The Architect you see where my observations take me, Thanks for posting.

girlygirl1234 commented on The Battle Still Rages

03-22-2010

this is really good. thats funny my last name is jones. but i like it alot keep going

commonreactor commented on The Battle Still Rages

03-19-2010

you've got a very big important message in there. Glad to see people still view the division as a weapon and aren't just stuck in their newest electronic toy. Thank you for sharing this.

WarriorMonk

03/19/2010

All the wars currently being fought are between "us" and "them", yet the people on the street in the name of whom these battles are being fought are as hospitable and warm as their leaders are hostile. For every individual that stays silent gives the powers of collectivity more influence...

elmofreak4u commented on The Battle Still Rages

03-19-2010

I sincerely enjoyed this poem. I agree that Unity is the only way to successfully overcome these obstacles. Yet, I don't see it happening because humans are too concerned about the flaws in everyone.

WarriorMonk

03/19/2010

flaws reinforce our humanity and the fact we focus on them means there is still hope of repelling the forces collectivity and cultural homogenisation. The more we talk and share and express ourselves the more hope there will be.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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