The Beach

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    The Beach

     There's a place on earth
    Where you can walk and feel warmth
    The smell of it, is invigorating
    It urges my body to go swimming
    There's a wave approaching the shore
    A guy goes in with his surfboard
    As I put my towel on the sand
    I put sunscreen on my hand
    Made sure I spread it all over
    To avoid getting skin cancer
    Finally, I go in the water
    Probably stayed in for an hour
    I'm happy that the beach
    Is within my reach

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    sunshine33710 commented on The Beach

    07-24-2010

    As well as you do I love to go the beach and my kids as well. Although I wish I can go with just my hubby and I so I can get some sun. I love to swim, as I was told when I was younger I swam like a fish. lol!
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    blueberry

    07/24/2010

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

    BikemanRJ commented on The Beach

    03-26-2010

    I wish I was on that beach you made me feel the warmth of the sun and smell the salt water in the air. Good Poem God Bless BikemanRJ
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    blueberry

    03/27/2010

    Thanks for reading the poem. Glad I could awake your senses of the beach.

    earthly commented on The Beach

    03-14-2010

    I love the beach too and your words helped put a smile on my face just dreaming about going-it will be awhile yet-lol...Earthly
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    blueberry

    03/14/2010

    I'm glad I can put a smile on your face, that's my intention. I appreciate the comment.

    gogant commented on The Beach

    02-28-2010

    With these words, Blue, you can carry one away to the warmth of the smiling sun on the white sand that tingles one's toes...forever and a day......................Simply charming........................gogant
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    blueberry

    02/28/2010

    Thanks Gogant again for your comment. I appreciate it.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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