Unforgettable Dream

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Unforgettable Dream

I was at some beautiful beach
My eyes looked up at the luxurious hotel
Wondering where I must be
My feet felt the warmth of the sand
As my body was touched by the ocean breeze
Everyone was wearing white
There must be some kind of party
Suddenly, I heard a mix of music
Everyone was dancing
Laughter and smiles
filled up my dream
I sat underneath the boardwalk deck
Just to stay away from the sun awhile
A very attractive guy approached me
His smile so appealing
He introduced himself
Then he sat next to me
His eyes were hazel
So mysterious and enchanting
His skin had a nice tan
He was shirtless
Showing off his nice physique
His smell was so hypnotizing
I could easily become weak in my knees
As the music changed
His hand searched for mine
To lift me up from the sand
So we started to dance
My heart palpitated faster
His arms around my waist
Mine at around his neck
He leaned in
We started to kiss...


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innerbeauty30 commented on Unforgettable Dream

06-26-2012

fasinating I was really drawn in by this and I love how you endded it it was so awesome.

blueberry

06/26/2012

Thanks for taking your time to read, I truly appreciate it!

kdarcy commented on Unforgettable Dream

07-19-2010

Dreams can be more powerfull that life sometimes, the having and losing of someone or just missing them, etc. An easy read that reminds me, imagination is a wonderfull thing.

blueberry

07/19/2010

I appreciate the time you took to read and comment Kdarcy.

alb29oclfl commented on Unforgettable Dream

03-13-2010

you have orchestrated a beautiful dream, ending with a desire for the dream to continue

blueberry

03/14/2010

Thanks for reading!

mustascheman commented on Unforgettable Dream

03-05-2010

Sounds like something out of a romance novel. A good story that creates a nice vision of first encounters. If I had a dream like this...it would have ...like..dead fish everywhere...zombies walking around into the water with sharks eating them and me standing in a path of grass with flowers and my girl saying...'welcome to my hell!' Thats just my opinion. I like your tale though. Well done.

blueberry

03/07/2010

Well Mustascheman thanks for the insight of your dream. Seems like a nightmare to me. But, we all differ. Thank You very much for reading the poem and I'm glad you like it.

BikemanRJ commented on Unforgettable Dream

02-28-2010

Really liked this poem reminded me of a trip I took to Key West Florida what a beautiful picture you have painted of a perfect romantic meeting dream on. Bikeman RJ

blueberry

03/07/2010

Thanks Bikeman for your comment, I truly appreciate it.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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