Dance

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    Dance

    Lets enthusiastically dance all night
    Under the hypnotizing disco light

    Extend your inviting hand to me
    I will accept and let you take the lead

    Allow our feet to dance to the beat
    As you and I feel the intense heat

    You embrace me and hold me tight
    I can feel my vulnerable heart ignite

    As you whisper in my ear sweetly
    Saying I am very pretty

    A smile spreads on each others face
    We continue to dance to our pace

    Energetically moving from left to right
    Enjoying ourselves as others do in the spotlight

    A cloud of smoke surrounds us 
    Our dancing leaves us breathless

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    Sunvee commented on Dance

    09-27-2010

    I really like the flow of the piece; nice word pictures. Took me all the way back to how I misunderstood my Daughter's connection with "that guy".
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    blueberry

    09/27/2010

    Thanks alot for reading and commenting.

    beauty commented on Dance

    06-19-2010

    Definitely took me back to my highschool crush, very imaginatory read! Good Job!
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    blueberry

    06/20/2010

    Thanks Beauty for reading and commenting, I'm glad you like it.

    KING commented on Dance

    05-25-2010

    Kinda reminds me of the few times i got a chance to dance with a beautiful woman and tell her that she dances well or she smells good. Great read!
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    blueberry

    05/26/2010

    Thanks King for reading the poem and commenting.

    BikemanRJ commented on Dance

    04-26-2010

    A fantastic piece that you have written here. I can picture this dance in my head. With your excellent choice of words and word flow you have captured the moment. I have danced this dance back in the day. Great Poem 10+ God Bless Randy
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    blueberry

    04/27/2010

    Thanks Randy for reading and commenting. God Bless you too.

    alb29oclfl commented on Dance

    04-26-2010

    would you like to dance, a nice little piece...................................
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    blueberry

    04/26/2010

    Anytime....thx for reading.

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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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