The Current
There I stood on the shore
between two worlds
the great ocean before me
The surface was all I could see
looking at it I felt alone
like an outsider to an unseen life
so I dove in
put myself at it's mercy
allowing the current
to carry me along
and show me this world
Musicmynded1 commented on The Current
01-28-2011
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01-25-2011
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01-03-2011
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09-16-2010
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03-09-2010
If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| Dive | 22 | 11/06/2010 |
| The Line | 10 | 10/12/2010 |
| The Remnants Of Today | 19 | 09/25/2010 |
| Eternal Embrace | 22 | 09/14/2010 |
| The Vision | 20 | 05/05/2010 |
| The Ride Of Your Life | 25 | 01/31/2010 |
| The Eyes Of Madness | 18 | 12/25/2009 |
| Tomorrow | 15 | 12/25/2009 |
| Clearly Thinking About Confusion | 14 | 12/16/2009 |
| The Current | 14 | 12/25/2009 |
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