The effect you have

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    • JuliannK
    • "Without love we are birds with broken wings.." -Tuesdays With Morrie

    The effect you have
    There is something strange

    About the way you make me feel

    Its not the average feeling

    Yet its something that's defiantly real

    I wouldn't call it lust

    And I've never been in love

    So I cannot tell if that is what it is

    But one thing I do know is that you

    Always make me smile

    When no one else can

    It drives me crazy how with just one word

    You can make my day brighter

    I don't understand how you

    Have this effect one me

    But I know one thing

    I don't Want it to end

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    lonewolf commented on The effect you have

    01-17-2009

    very nicely written. I hope your ray of sunshine will continue to warm your heart.
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    Phoenix9 commented on The effect you have

    12-19-2008

    very nice
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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