The Life I Wish This Was

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    The Life I Wish This Was

     I would like to flee and go
    Where the golden apples grow
    Where the pretty birdies Sing
    Where the Great Wall Circles in a ring
    And where among the desert sands
    Some deserted city stands
    And where the grumpy crocodile
    Lies and sleeps in the great Nile
    And somewhere where there is no war
    For only love's worth fighting for. </3

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    BikemanRJ commented on The Life I Wish This Was

    02-27-2010

    Great rhyme and great job at taking the read on a journey I'm just not sure if I want to be in the same place as that grumpy old gater I think I would rather sit and listen to those perrty birds sing. God Bless BikemanRJ
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    scrambledeggs5

    02/27/2010

    Haha I probably wouldn't want ot be with the alligator either. Going on an adventure or journey was the image I was trying to portray and I'm glad it worked. :) Thank you!

    MrJTerra commented on The Life I Wish This Was

    02-26-2010

    GARBAGE LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL OLOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLL
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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